Poems.... just poems

[Carly]

Hey there Topix surfers... post your favorite poems here. If your post the work of another, please list their name even if it's just an online pseudo-name.

Thanks!
:)

[Carly]

"Writer's Thought"

I write words down
then scratch them out
I write something else
then without a doubt
I rip up the paper
and start anew
At this going rate
I'll never be through
So I'll think some more,
see what comes to mind
I'll write it down
but take my time
Maybe then
I'll make a rhyme
I've got nothing else
but plenty of time

[Carly]

"That Saturday"

I laugh
when I think about
the day we met
You knew
you would have me
I can't believe
you placed a bet!

But
I was different
than other girls
Not just
some easy pickins,
I am a
one-of-a-kind
kind of girl!

Your
motivation
did impress me,
Your perseverance
strong will
and dedication
Okay, so you
were practically
stalking me!

I laugh
when I think about
the day we met

[Carly]

"Oh, Really Romeo?"

I will not let you f*ck with my mind
I've seen this before and I know your kind

You string me along with your murmurs of love
And lies of how I must be sent from above

But love is not something you just profess
The object of your love- you never possess

You're not supposed to tell your loved ones lies
The people you truly love, you'll look in the eyes

You won't keep secrets from a love that is true
You'll confess everything- let them know the real you

So, tell me again of your great love for me
But only say words you can say honestly

[Carly]

"Charming"

I will captivate you with my body and mind

I'll steal your senses- leave you deaf and blind

Numb with no feeling, unable to speak

I'll hypnotize you and you won't even blink

You'll love every minute I take over your mind

And when I touch your body, you'll be feeling just fine

I'll take you higher than you've ever been

You'll want my possession again and again

So drink of my potion, listen to my commands

Adhere to my spells, obey my demands

And the ecstasy I give, I'll give you again

A euphoric experience that will never end

[Carly]

"Lunar Love Light"

The moon
glows bright
tonight,
so much so,
I can see
your face
clearly
in the dark
and
I find
myself staring
at you.
I love
your smile
and the way
the corners
of your mouth
turn up
at the ends.
Those little
green and gold
flecks
in your
blue eyes
lead me
to a place
where I can
feel your
love for me
with just a
glance.
It's
a wonderful
night
to look at you,
my love;
but I know
that even
when the
moon
is not full....
our love
still shines
bright.

[hotep]

Hey carly I got a couple of compostions I dont know if you can call them poems

"Creator"

Feel so heavy like ferromagnetic potential
Lets transiently fluctuate capacious materials
Into mass less gauge bosons
Of inverted quarks in conjunction with man made electrons
I bet I would concoct/create the big bang again
And we would see my reign
How my nappy fro imbibes and drains
Energy in distinction to atramentous matter
Created my own queen from my rib cage/bladder
A aphotic pulchritudinous female smell like attar

[hotep]

"Mad scientist"

I developed parnormal Extravagant rhyming abilities
during days of the scientific meeting in einstiens facilites
Did over a year meditating with extrametrical beings as small as atoms
Collecting potential dynamist datum’s
Few can challenge me a superior black being
Skull bashing cave men sending them down skiing
I transport from galaxies to universities
Given verbal intercourse to a millions creating diversity

[hotep]

The Suten General

Dont be libellous The Suten general will send you into the matrix traps
Have you in the twilight zone being penetrated by rats
with ultraviolet rays glowing out their fangs
Devouring your brains
Like lettuce
You havent even evolved to human status
Got a army of angels at my disposale
Ready to conquer the phsycical and unatural
Laws of physics dont apply to the general

[hotep]

"Mystery"

Whats going on
Scientist and masoons
studied the taxonom
of pshycons
So how is he faster then light years
Maybe his essence is the creator of tachyons
Faster then light sub atomic particles
Now they try to study him and read him like antediluvian articles
And swear that he is not who he says he is with abilities to bend time and bring forth knowledge from all dimensional levels
And command an army headed by archangel Michaels

Creating diatonic harmony
Used by angels to seduce lesser beings and give them potpourri
String theory extended once I showed them the instruments that I was using for recorden
I got my driver license suspended
To bad they don’t know I have my space ship ensconced in my basement

My armor is made of the residue from the core of mars mixed with platinum
Catch up family am in the next millennium
Electromagnetic forces couldn’t hold this
Relativity doesn’t apply to me
Nor does gravity
Just mere illusions of the mind
Consider the times study the signs
Revolution is coming within inside
Therefore the star will be realigned
The faith of mankind slowly lays in my hands
Opening the third eye located on the left side of your pineal glands

[CarlyRenee]

I'm diggin' Hotep...

:)

[CarlyRenee]

There are dreams for sale each and every day
What would you sacrifice? How much would you pay?
Anything you want, can be yours, it's true
There are no requirements to become the new you
Do you dream of being beautiful? Just buy a magazine
and flip through the pages, you'll see what I mean.
It will tell you exactly what wardrobe to buy
How much you should weigh and what make up to apply
And if you don't look like the models, well that's okay, too
Just look up your local surgeons and they'll know what to do
They'll offer you a figure with proportions outta whack
But society says it's beautiful, if you can live with that
Do you dream of being educated? Well just get online
You can have a new diploma in a fraction of the time
A Bachelor of Science of an Associate's Degree
Just click, click, click and it's just that easy
It isn't very difficult to find the answers to the tests
There's no need for being honest and making an educated guess
So long as you're paying for your new 'college' course
You'll get a new diploma and no one will ask for the source
Do you dream of being rich? Are you ready to make a deal?
It's really not that hard if you lie, cheat and steal.
Just fabricate your income and credit you can get
Then stop by the local casino and place your daily bet
Maybe you could get some insurance on the items in your home
Then stage a home invasion, claiming they stole everything you own
Or if you're even more greedy and just can't bear to wait
Just put on your gloves and ski mask and just take someone's estate.
Do you dream of being healthy? Boy do I have news for you
There's a pill, a drink and a meal plan that makes you live longer, too
Now don't mind all the side effects, like blindness and vomiting
They've done some clinical trials and only a few ended up dying
Now don't forget to take your pill and drink your shake each day
And follow the meal plan exactly and exercise once a day
Now don't get too excited, they've made no guarantee
And if you agree to follow their program, they have liability
Yea, they're selling dreams, if you're in the market to buy
It seems like everyone's got a dream and for it, they're willing to die
But before you go and make the deal, just ask yourself this...
Are you willing to give up what you've already got, just to have your wish?

[hotep]

“Longing for My Pulchritudinous Queen”

A piece of my soul is disoriented
Half of my mind is unsaturated
Feel numb like my body has been abducted
Went to see a mad psychic who told me to pop cyanide
But even in my attempt I couldn’t die
Took trips through the galaxy to feel the void
But its getting stronger like its on anabolic steroids
Got a session with Sigmund Freud
He couldn’t fathom like I was talking about destroying ascidiozooid
So I guess I couldn’t speak to a finite mind with a infinite predicaments
Spoke to light beings tripled to their exponents
They told me I was only a half of a entities components
I went on voyages searching seeking went 12 rounds with a one eyed Titan
Led crusades through Europe from Russia to Britain
Searched the desserts of the afraka with aircrafts shaped like amphibians
Time traveled to hand modern day weapons to barbarians
Give up the voyages to study the aspects of the mathematical
Formulated the principle to turn atoms into any matter but couldn’t find my compatible

[hotep]

Excellent Carly

continuing what you were speaking on

Many wish for material commodity
Ashamed to wear the same clothes as last year or live in the same property
New and improved is the moto of the this generation
Using up all resources to show an illusion of beauty continuing mankind’s exterminations
Forever trapped in the physical realm
Stuck like the trunk of an elm
Our perceptions of reality is so diluted
So you cant blame the youth for being polluted
Crying out for help none hear so for years it accumulated

[CarlyRenee]

hotep wrote:

Excellent Carly
continuing what you were speaking on
Many wish for material commodity
Ashamed to wear the same clothes as last year or live in the same property
New and improved is the moto of the this generation
Using up all resources to show an illusion of beauty continuing mankind’s exterminations
Forever trapped in the physical realm
Stuck like the trunk of an elm
Our perceptions of reality is so diluted
So you cant blame the youth for being polluted
Crying out for help none hear so for years it accumulated

I love reply poems.... awesome!

So true, hotep... so true.

[CarlyRenee]

"Cementing the Sands of Time"

I'd like to mix cement in the sands of time
And stop it dead in it's tracks
Time's going too fast and I can't keep up
I need to get some of it back
I want to enjoy all the days I've had joy
And relive all the days I've had sorrow
I want to experience my memories again
Because today will be gone by tomorrow
"It seems like just yesterday", it's such a cliche
But we all know how truthful it is
We've all had the feeling that just yesterday
Was a day we were playing as kids
A year seems to pass with each tick of the clock
A hundred fly by before noon
What seems like forever is not far away
You'll see, it will be here soon
Memories fade and momentos get lost
And time just keeps flying by
The future and history are one in the same
They're both passing moments of time
The blink of an eye or the snap of your finger
Can measure an eternity
Time's not gonna stop and it's not gonna slow
And this is a certainty
But I'd like to mix cement in the sands of time
And stop it dead in it's tracks
Time's going too fast and I can't keep up
I need to get some of it back

[hotep]

Third Eye panel gland

Open your thrid eye unintelligent man matter is mass
Exhort you to sit down and to ensnare my class
Before you relinquish thoughts ausculate to my forecast
Anemic odes educe predicaments
When correlating with me a light being tripled to a trillion exponents

Linear equation flows I author and initiate
My paradoxical proverbs discombobulate
mathematicians for centuries past due date
I am the first and last pharaoh
so therefore I dont give a fuck in other words I am Phlegmatic
Ethiopian weaponry that reverse cholecystagogic
class seems to lethargic
Procure tincture elixirs to help your lethargy
Commission out a modus operandi for degree of infinity
Perform Cantor's Solution Denumerability

[CarlyRenee]

A single touch from you
and I'm ablaze
like a dry dead leaf
under the hot summer sun
beneath a magnifying glass
at just the right angle.
I can tell from one look
that you want me
and you want me
to want you more
and I do.
A single touch from you
and I'm tingling
like the pins and needles
you feel when a limb
falls asleep.
I can tell from one touch
that you want me
and you want me
to want you more
and I do.
A single hug from you
and I'm enveloped
like the meandering fog
seeping into every crevice
of the forest floor.
I can tell from one hug
that you want me
and you want me
to want you more
and I do.
A single kiss from you
and I'm ignited
like gunpowder struck
by the hammer of a gun.
I can tell with one kiss
that you want me
and you want me
to want you more
and I do.
A single night with you
and I'm exhausted
like an empty aerosol can
that sprays only fumes.
I can tell from one night
that you want me
and you want me
to want you more
and I will..... later!

[hotep]

"To my Enemies"

Beat you senseless
Until you bow down on your knees
And beg for my forgiveness
Cut your head off with mercury blades
Just short of a fade
Hang you with a rope
On a boat
With ninja stars cut out your Adams apple from your throat
Then put chemicals in your hometowns water supply mixed with cyanide
And watch them all die

I was angry when I wrote this.I got a bail from court saying I have to pay 3000 over 3 years and I got my car stolen with over 500 worthy of electrons i was holding for a family memeber.Oh man that was a bad day!

[jimmy dean]

The finger of blame is easy to point,
almost as easy at hitting this joint.
instead of pointing fingers and naming names,
lets make a circle and play silly games.
Lifes a breeze when you dont have a care,
but without responsibility you'd have nothing to share.
Shit here lately has been really crazy,
its got my head feeling really hazy.
People doubt and people hate,
people lie and people take.
History shows us the world is cruel,
I dont understand how could they be such fools.
Before you let out your accusations and stir up the coop,
take a closer look at the real truth.
Now listen up people and listen good,
the world is changing in ways we never thought it would.
We're all on on this rock together,
so we can't let it fall into the nether.
We are the writers of this wild story,
will we let it burn in flames or rise in glory.
So have patience and have heart,
because this my friend is only the start.