One sad note

[poetallday]

This is a poem that I wrote yesterday and i would like to get some feedback on it if it's possible. Thank You.

There is one sad note that I can always find when looking into his eyes.
Behind them one very sad tune is playing.
As if there was a vibrating violin hammering away,
Behind his sight.
My voice is the cheerless note that I spy briefly when looking away from them.
As I open my mouth with even the smallest sigh, I know that he is dying.
Together we compliment each other and we are one anothers everything.
At once there exists a conflict which isn’t music.
Between us is a gulf neither of us can cross over to get to the other.
I have a means by which to express myself.
His medium is connected to an education he finds it difficult to utilize.
Instead he uses his words as a substitute.
Each letter is a declaration of a tormented expression of his mind.
Silence is something he cannot savor however, he may try.
A trembling enters his voice and as a tear begins to fall for me,
The tone behind his eyes escapes and enters my soul.
His anguish has me staggering in suffering, and then I take my last breath.
We become a pulverized swelling of the ground.
Nothing but that one miserable note plays itself out.
A stop to how we used to harmonize in synch, and a rhythm brought to a close.
Over the two of us a hush comes down taking away all light.
A separation of song and composition.
The risk of his melody fights for entrance behind his lids but can find no way back in.
Worthlessness in a field barren of the music of leaves, blown in the wind.

[CarlyRenee]

I really like it. I think I can hear that sad note... :`(