my revised version of poetry on the s...

my revised version of poetry on the story of romeo and juliet

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Since: Jan 11

Highland City, FL

#1 Apr 3, 2011
Romeo and Juliet, Juliet and Romeo,
Two young lovers in the city of Verona,
At first site Romeo swore he was in love,
Too bad young Juliet wanted to save herself for the one above,
Her mind soon changed she was smitten by his charm, and the talk of his tongue,
A week passed by and the wedding bells rung,
It was all kept a secret neither the Montague’s nor Capulet’s could know,
It was sad fate that the twos families where not friends, but instead foe,
With the killing of Tybalt, Juliet’s cousin, Romeo was soon cast away,
But the very next morning nude, in bed, together they lay,
Out of her bed Romeo had to rush,
Juliet mourned, and cried, she had been crushed,
Her father thought of a way to dry her tears,
But the plan he came up with was one of her biggest fears,
He wanted to have her marry a man, whom she did not care for,
She told him the truth and he threatened to put her on the street with the poor,
Juliet thought long and hard for a plan to get out of this mess,
She got sleeping potion and she was off hoping it would be a success,
Too bad Romeo didn’t receive the letter, with which she had composed,
Explaining the fake death note she had proposed,
So when Romeo found her to be, what he thought was dead,
He gulped down the poison, and fell on his head,
Juliet awake very soon after,
She had found her love Romeo dead, it was a disaster,
With the kiss of his lips, she only wanted to die,
Her eyes caught a glimpse of the dagger at Romeos side,
She gripped it her hand, and said a few prayers,
It’s crazy what one does when one really cares,
Goodbye to Romeo, and a second farewell to Juliet,
This story of love, is one I can never forget

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