"ghana's" poem to qtgirl,eastldngyal,...

"ghana's" poem to qtgirl,eastldngyal,samoan,bappie,joyze

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Since: Sep 08

Rocky River, OH

#1 Nov 12, 2008
i told ya'll i would write a beautiful poem for ya so here it is.

I don't wanna wait in vain for your love;
I don't wanna wait in vain for your love.
From the very first time I rest my eyes on you, girl,
My heart says follow through.
But I know, now, that I'm way down on your line,
But the waitin' feel is fine:
So don't treat me like a puppet on a string,
'Cause I know I have to do my thing.
Don't talk to me as if you think I'm dumb;
I wanna know when you're gonna come.
I don't wanna wait in vain for your love;
'Cause if summer is here,
I'm still waiting there;
Winter is here,
And I'm still waiting there
I FINALLY DID IT,WHAT DO U THINK M.O.P?

Since: Sep 08

Rocky River, OH

#2 Nov 12, 2008
i forgot to mention queenofthenile,africanamerican beauty and apv

“reppin' dat 2up 2 down”

Since: Sep 07

Va

#3 Nov 12, 2008
Awwww. So where did you steal this poem from? Lol.

Since: Sep 08

Rocky River, OH

#4 Nov 12, 2008
QueenofTheNile wrote:
Awwww. So where did you steal this poem from? Lol.
old family recipe but atleast it's family.please dont tr to bust me.

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#5 Nov 12, 2008
It's actually pretty good. Not my personal style though as I don't like different words to be repeated at the end of individual lines, but if you can pull off, then go for it.

Since: Sep 08

Rocky River, OH

#6 Nov 12, 2008
MasterOfPuppets wrote:
It's actually pretty good. Not my personal style though as I don't like different words to be repeated at the end of individual lines, but if you can pull off, then go for it.
i get a A++ or just A+?

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#7 Nov 12, 2008
It's all subjective, so who's to say?

APV

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still busy trolling??

#8 Nov 12, 2008
ghana wrote:
i told ya'll i would write a beautiful poem for ya so here it is.
I don't wanna wait in vain for your love;
I don't wanna wait in vain for your love.
From the very first time I rest my eyes on you, girl,
My heart says follow through.
But I know, now, that I'm way down on your line,
But the waitin' feel is fine:
So don't treat me like a puppet on a string,
'Cause I know I have to do my thing.
Don't talk to me as if you think I'm dumb;
I wanna know when you're gonna come.
I don't wanna wait in vain for your love;
'Cause if summer is here,
I'm still waiting there;
Winter is here,
And I'm still waiting there
I FINALLY DID IT,WHAT DO U THINK M.O.P?
That was sweet. You got some redemption points for that!

;o)

Since: Sep 08

Rocky River, OH

#10 Nov 12, 2008
MasterOfPuppets wrote:
It's all subjective, so who's to say?
u better judge it before it's Ghana vs MOP round 2.i don't think any of those poor girls wanna see that happen again.
Sheep Herder

Rockville, MD

#11 Nov 12, 2008
ghana wrote:
i told ya'll i would write a beautiful poem for ya so here it is.
I don't wanna wait in vain for your love;
I don't wanna wait in vain for your love.
From the very first time I rest my eyes on you, girl,
My heart says follow through.
But I know, now, that I'm way down on your line,
But the waitin' feel is fine:
So don't treat me like a puppet on a string,
'Cause I know I have to do my thing.
Don't talk to me as if you think I'm dumb;
I wanna know when you're gonna come.
I don't wanna wait in vain for your love;
'Cause if summer is here,
I'm still waiting there;
Winter is here,
And I'm still waiting there
I FINALLY DID IT,WHAT DO U THINK M.O.P?
Bob Marley isn't amused.
Jay

Herndon, VA

#12 Nov 12, 2008
Sheep Herder wrote:
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Bob Marley isn't amused.
LMFBAO
Jay

Herndon, VA

#13 Nov 12, 2008
silly africans can't be original

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#14 Nov 12, 2008
ghana wrote:
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u better judge it before it's Ghana vs MOP round 2.i don't think any of those poor girls wanna see that happen again.
I already did.
Sheep Herder

Rockville, MD

#15 Nov 12, 2008
Jay wrote:
silly africans can't be original
LMAO. That was uncalled for. ghana probably isn't even a real African.

Since: Sep 08

Rocky River, OH

#16 Nov 12, 2008
Jay wrote:
silly africans can't be original
i was so disappointed when i say ur name on my thread, please get the fck oouuuuuuttttttt.

Since: Sep 08

Rocky River, OH

#17 Nov 12, 2008
MasterOfPuppets wrote:
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I already did.
thanx mop.can u please get these trolls ouuta here, i am trying to show a sof side here.
Sheep Herder

Rockville, MD

#18 Nov 12, 2008
ghana wrote:
i told ya'll i would write a beautiful poem for ya so here it is.
I don't wanna wait in vain for your love;
I don't wanna wait in vain for your love.
From the very first time I rest my eyes on you, girl,
My heart says follow through.
But I know, now, that I'm way down on your line,
But the waitin' feel is fine:
So don't treat me like a puppet on a string,
'Cause I know I have to do my thing.
Don't talk to me as if you think I'm dumb;
I wanna know when you're gonna come.
I don't wanna wait in vain for your love;
'Cause if summer is here,
I'm still waiting there;
Winter is here,
And I'm still waiting there
I FINALLY DID IT,WHAT DO U THINK M.O.P?
It's been three years since I'm knockin' on your door,
And I still can knock some more:
Ooh girl, ooh girl, is it feasible?
I wanna know now, for I to knock some more.
Ya see, in life I know there's lots of grief,
But your love is my relief:
Tears in my eyes burn - tears in my eyes burn
While I'm waiting - while I'm waiting for my turn,
See!
Jay

Herndon, VA

#19 Nov 12, 2008
ghana wrote:
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i was so disappointed when i say ur name on my thread, please get the fck oouuuuuuttttttt.
Yeah Bcith you miss me...you on an African-American forum...get the hell over it.

Since: Sep 08

Rocky River, OH

#20 Nov 12, 2008
Jay wrote:
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Yeah Bcith you miss me...you on an African-American forum...get the hell over it.
jay,just get out.

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#21 Nov 12, 2008
ghana wrote:
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thanx mop.can u please get these trolls ouuta here, i am trying to show a sof side here.
What the hell do you expect me to do? I'm no moderator and these people insist on being rude, pretty much being free to do such as the Topix admins and mods really either aren't doing their job or are just understaffed. Nonetheless, I can't do anything really.

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